From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Wed May 21 15:04:32 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 58D4BE26; Wed, 21 May 2014 15:04:32 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 45AB52F88; Wed, 21 May 2014 15:04:32 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8) with ESMTP id s4LF4V7C055014; Wed, 21 May 2014 15:04:31 GMT (envelope-from allanjude@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from allanjude@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8/Submit) id s4LF4VxG055013; Wed, 21 May 2014 15:04:31 GMT (envelope-from allanjude@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201405211504.s4LF4VxG055013@svn.freebsd.org> From: Allan Jude Date: Wed, 21 May 2014 15:04:31 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44898 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 21 May 2014 15:04:32 -0000 Author: allanjude Date: Wed May 21 15:04:31 2014 New Revision: 44898 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44898 Log: Fix grammer and remove a comma Submitted by: dru Approved by: eadler (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Wed May 21 09:55:55 2014 (r44897) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Wed May 21 15:04:31 2014 (r44898) @@ -3384,9 +3384,9 @@ UWWemqWuz3lAZuORQ9KX The Corrected field indicates the date, time, time offset, and releases that were corrected. The section in parentheses shows each branch - to which the fix has been merged, and the version number + for which the fix has been merged, and the version number of the corresponding release from that branch. The - release identifier itself, includes the version number + release identifier itself includes the version number and, if appropriate, the patch level. The patch level is the letter p followed by a number, indicating the sequence number of the patch, allowing