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Date:      Wed, 21 May 2014 15:04:31 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Allan Jude <allanjude@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r44898 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security
Message-ID:  <201405211504.s4LF4VxG055013@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: allanjude
Date: Wed May 21 15:04:31 2014
New Revision: 44898
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44898

Log:
  Fix grammer and remove a comma
  
  Submitted by:	dru
  Approved by:	eadler (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Wed May 21 09:55:55 2014	(r44897)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml	Wed May 21 15:04:31 2014	(r44898)
@@ -3384,9 +3384,9 @@ UWWemqWuz3lAZuORQ9KX
 	  <para>The <literal>Corrected</literal> field indicates the
 	    date, time, time offset, and releases that were
 	    corrected.  The section in parentheses shows each branch
-	    to which the fix has been merged, and the version number
+	    for which the fix has been merged, and the version number
 	    of the corresponding release from that branch.  The
-	    release identifier itself, includes the version number
+	    release identifier itself includes the version number
 	    and, if appropriate, the patch level.  The patch level is
 	    the letter <literal>p</literal> followed by a number,
 	    indicating the sequence number of the patch, allowing



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