Date: Thu, 1 Aug 2013 15:10:19 +0000 (UTC) From: Brad Davis <brd@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42483 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers Message-ID: <201308011510.r71FAJCe035573@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: brd Date: Thu Aug 1 15:10:19 2013 New Revision: 42483 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42483 Log: - Updating NFS doc to use services instead of specific binaries. Also offered a couple of minor points of clarification in the text. - Clean up some contractions and a double the. PR: 180955 Submitted by: Ken Reed <kreed002@gmail.com> Reviewed by: bjk, Allan Jude Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Thu Aug 1 03:09:47 2013 (r42482) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Thu Aug 1 15:10:19 2013 (r42483) @@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ </sect2> <sect2 id="network-inetd-conf"> - <!-- XXX This section isn't very clear, and could do with some lovin' --> + <!-- XXX This section is not very clear and could do with some tlc --> <title><filename>inetd.conf</filename></title> <para>Configuration of <application>inetd</application> is @@ -819,20 +819,15 @@ mountd_flags="-r"</programlisting> <para>Please refer to <xref linkend="configtuning-rcd"/> for more information about using rc scripts.</para> - <para>Alternatively, a reboot will make FreeBSD set everything - up properly. A reboot is not necessary though. - Executing the following commands as <username>root</username> - should start everything up.</para> - - <para>On the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server:</para> - - <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>rpcbind</userinput> -&prompt.root; <userinput>nfsd -u -t -n 4</userinput> -&prompt.root; <userinput>mountd -r</userinput></screen> + <para>NFS services can now be started by running the following + command, on the <acronym>NFS</acronym> server, as + <username>root</username>:</para> + + <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service nfsd start</userinput></screen> <para>On the <acronym>NFS</acronym> client:</para> - <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>nfsiod -n 4</userinput></screen> + <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>service nfsclient restart</userinput></screen> <para>Now everything should be ready to actually mount a remote file system. In these examples the server's name will be @@ -1609,7 +1604,7 @@ Exports list on foobar: good reason, never propagate passwords for <username>root</username> and other administrative accounts to all the servers in the NIS domain. Therefore, - before the the NIS maps are initialized, configure the + before the NIS maps are initialized, configure the primary password files:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cp /etc/master.passwd /var/yp/master.passwd</userinput> @@ -1649,7 +1644,7 @@ Creating an YP server will require that Questions will all be asked at the beginning of the procedure. Do you want this procedure to quit on non-fatal errors? [y/n: n] <userinput>n</userinput> Ok, please remember to go back and redo manually whatever fails. -If you don't, something might not work. +If not, something might not work. At this point, we have to construct a list of this domains YP servers. rod.darktech.org is already known as master server. Please continue to add any slave servers, one per line. When you are @@ -1711,7 +1706,7 @@ Questions will all be asked at the begin Do you want this procedure to quit on non-fatal errors? [y/n: n] <userinput>n</userinput> Ok, please remember to go back and redo manually whatever fails. -If you don't, something might not work. +If not, something might not work. There will be no further questions. The remainder of the procedure should take a few minutes, to copy the databases from ellington. Transferring netgroup... @@ -1756,7 +1751,7 @@ Transferring hosts.byname... ypxfr: Exiting: Map successfully transferred coltrane has been setup as an YP slave server without any errors. -Don't forget to update map ypservers on ellington.</screen> +Remember to update map ypservers on ellington.</screen> <para>There should be a directory called <filename>/var/yp/test-domain</filename>. Copies of the
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