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Author: bjk
Date: Sun Nov 13 23:22:52 2016
New Revision: 49662
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49662

Log:
  Remove draft notice from 2016Q3 report and tweak introduction

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml	Sun Nov 13 18:04:01 2016	(r49661)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2016-07-2016-09.xml	Sun Nov 13 23:22:52 2016	(r49662)
@@ -15,13 +15,8 @@
   <section>
     <title>Introduction</title>
 
-    <p><strong>This is a draft of the July&ndash;September 2016
-      status report.  Please check back after it is finalized, and
-      an announcement email is sent to the &os;-Announce mailing
-      list.</strong></p>
-
     <p>As focused as we are on the present and what is happening
-      now, it is sometimes useful to take a reminder at where we have
+      now, it is sometimes useful to take a fresh look at where we have
       come from, and where we are going.  This quarter, we had our
       newest doc committer working to trace through the tangled
       history of many utilities, and we also get a glimpse looking
@@ -38,7 +33,7 @@
     <p>The work of the present is no less exciting, with 11.0
       making its way out just after the end of Q3, the new core
       coming into its own, and much more that you'll have to read
-      to find out.</p>
+      and find out.</p>
 
     <p>&mdash;Benjamin Kaduk</p>