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Author: dru
Date: Fri May 23 14:06:31 2014
New Revision: 44914
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44914

Log:
  Finish editorial review of install chapter.
  The Handbook needs a section on how to use bsdconfig and this chapter
  should reference it.
  
  Sponsored by:	iXsystems

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Fri May 23 11:43:07 2014	(r44913)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml	Fri May 23 14:06:31 2014	(r44914)
@@ -102,12 +102,12 @@
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to create the &os; installation media.</para>
+	<para>The minimum hardware requirements and &os; supported
+	  architectures.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>The minimum hardware requirements and &os; supported
-	  architectures.</para>
+	<para>How to create the &os; installation media.</para>
       </listitem>
 
 <!-- WB: verify this, including GPT partition notation (ada0p2)
@@ -124,6 +124,15 @@
 	<para>The questions <application>bsdinstall</application> will
 	  ask, what they mean, and how to answer them.</para>
       </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
+	<para>How to troubleshoot a failed installation.</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
+	<para>How to access a live version of &os; before committing
+	  to an installation.</para>
+      </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>Before reading this chapter, you should:</para>
@@ -2703,35 +2712,34 @@ Starting sshd.</screen>
   <sect1 xml:id="using-live-cd">
     <title>Using the Live <acronym>CD</acronym></title>
 
-    <para>A live <acronym>CD</acronym> of &os; is available on the
-      same <acronym>CD</acronym> as the main installation program.
+    <para>The welcome menu of <application>sysinstall</application>, shown in <xref
+	linkend="bsdinstall-choose-mode"/>, provides a
+      <guibutton>[&nbsp;Live&nbsp;CD&nbsp;]</guibutton> option.
       This is useful for those who are still wondering whether &os;
       is the right operating system for them and want to test some of
       the features before installing.</para>
 
-    <note>
-      <para>The following points should be noted while using the live
-	<acronym>CD</acronym>:</para>
+      <para>The following points should be noted before using the
+	<guibutton>[&nbsp;Live&nbsp;CD&nbsp;]</guibutton>:</para>
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>To gain access to the system, authentication is
 	    required.  The username is <systemitem
-	      class="username">root</systemitem>, and the password is
+	      class="username">root</systemitem> and the password is
 	    blank.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>As the system runs directly from the
-	    <acronym>CD</acronym>, performance will be significantly
+	  <para>As the system runs directly from the installation
+	    media, performance will be significantly
 	    slower than that of a system installed on a hard
 	    disk.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>The live <acronym>CD</acronym> provides a command
+	  <para>This option only provides a command
 	    prompt and not a graphical interface.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
-    </note>
   </sect1>
 </chapter>