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Subject: docs/136061: grammar nits in ipfs.8
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>Number:         136061
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       grammar nits in ipfs.8
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Jun 26 03:50:01 UTC 2009
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Ben Kaduk
>Release:        8-CURRENT
>Organization:
MIT SIPB
>Environment:
FreeBSD periphrasis.mit.edu 8.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 8.0-CURRENT #11: Mon Feb 16 02:20:54 EST 2009     kaduk@periphrasis.mit.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/PERIPHRASIS  amd64
>Description:
There are a couple of grammar nits in the man page -- one use of 'as' instead of 'are', and an incomplete sentence.
>How-To-Repeat:
man ipfw
>Fix:
patch is available at
http://stuff.mit.edu/afs/sipb.mit.edu/user/kaduk/freebsd/patches/ipfw.8.diff.2009.06.25

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted: