From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Mar 31 13:28:48 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4DC931FC for ; Mon, 31 Mar 2014 13:28:48 +0000 (UTC) Received: from nm11-vm1.access.bullet.mail.gq1.yahoo.com (nm11-vm1.access.bullet.mail.gq1.yahoo.com [216.39.63.9]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 13071CF9 for ; Mon, 31 Mar 2014 13:28:47 +0000 (UTC) Received: from [216.39.60.176] by nm11.access.bullet.mail.gq1.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 31 Mar 2014 13:28:41 -0000 Received: from [216.39.60.233] by tm12.access.bullet.mail.gq1.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 31 Mar 2014 13:28:41 -0000 Received: from [127.0.0.1] by omp1004.access.mail.gq1.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 31 Mar 2014 13:28:41 -0000 X-Yahoo-Newman-Property: ymail-3 X-Yahoo-Newman-Id: 365957.53810.bm@omp1004.access.mail.gq1.yahoo.com Received: (qmail 54686 invoked by uid 60001); 31 Mar 2014 13:28:41 -0000 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=att.net; s=s1024; t=1396272521; bh=aSsF8WtuRTGZzR9iOLrtypx8dUQ7HqdDDCwDxIuOsHQ=; h=X-YMail-OSG:Received:X-Rocket-MIMEInfo:X-Mailer:References:Message-ID:Date:From:Reply-To:Subject:To:In-Reply-To:MIME-Version:Content-Type; b=2XdO629gsQgO/7As1xD/CIyyyroOQ4CfHnwJ4k0JG58SI+Wz3LIPLMAQ+Eyw2TQNrlswDfJM0AMN0p89pFf+cwinseJ6ZswtOEuLS7pwbcz92TJW+6Y50ML9H1a+w+tY2a5Oo1wwLG3NMf1RczJjAxQ4lujHqMh9eUVkhD3hO3s= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; q=dns; c=nofws; s=s1024; d=att.net; h=X-YMail-OSG:Received:X-Rocket-MIMEInfo:X-Mailer:References:Message-ID:Date:From:Reply-To:Subject:To:In-Reply-To:MIME-Version:Content-Type; b=M/BTt9ck079cs/51DabfNGlVsivOSeddkiWYiZjc7e3ru/GG5MaD13+cUh8+7ydVSnemM/Qfshimic4hFQNyuCLvRnKqOjqL4CIwKI5AyL7U/0UYyV6L1smVDF8sMtLrDdeUPoxrx7KZae5FH8DMddNVtVELnsJxDWqHYTqTIqM=; X-YMail-OSG: PZu5xiQVM1mKj7HqtDZNyXcqPmR1JgvO0oFChO4S.PTPGig JUK5h.mjAOit3frtO8ERiFzOvNEXCDeVKrusQpPPxGDxD87Dq7MVHo_N0XqL fezNeHtjyJsGQVC47T0xwlwKi5ZC5gvwg9hgG7xJhjgEu_BE25gC3vw_2yxr 2NNj3153tH30lpUv3A1j6pO6EkJ8s4lwKdxBO.Jqpcr26UWj2xV8tIz_dz7u 2ADmbUk2jcrbNWSm.kEpE4qgCr2J8ZjjXsAp6OpeNzFEwMQbhfwRpmongty_ RxPi1C2cfjz7o.THKxnvqyhUVHVjISpBJn.g7RgpaJd7Tzt5mv2kL.00Fnjh 36Qjy54gKaSMyBAMN7twfByV2GWLvF2ZU7Pqqa9dSgUevwXxsExA_FcMl_Mk T0VhO4SaLjTNKD7V7h_Ip0i2eVFH3wWSP63cEJCL5vtM1uiwWRkxaKHrGJVX nd9.cx1_WaL4jvt99uAfC05lF4AtsxagqVcN063XHEnO2jQTR7TToK8dfhAi PB63YAzqZJ0xUtq5gku1iJvUmF9PZKxVZ Received: from [99.98.83.69] by web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com via HTTP; Mon, 31 Mar 2014 06:28:41 PDT X-Rocket-MIMEInfo: 002.001, X19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fXwoKPiBGcm9tOiBUYXJhcyBLb3JlbmtvIDxkc0B1a3JodWIubmV0Pgo.VG86IGZyZWVic2QtZG9jQGZyZWVic2Qub3JnIAo.U2VudDogU2F0dXJkYXksIE1hcmNoIDI5LCAyMDE0IDEyOjE5IFBNCj5TdWJqZWN0OiBlbi9oYW5kYm9vay9hdWRpdDogcHJvcG9zZWQgY29ycmVjdGlvbnMKPiAKPgo.wqAgR29vZCBkYXksIGRvY0AgZm9sa3MuCj4KPsKgIFRoZXJlJ3JlIGEgZmV3IHRoaW5ncyB0aGF0IGNvdWxkIGJlIGltcHJvdmVkIHdpdGhpbiBhdWRpdCBjaGEBMAEBAQE- X-Mailer: YahooMailWebService/0.8.181.645 References: <20140329161905.GB92398@gamma.ukrhub.net> Message-ID: <1396272521.45856.YahooMailNeo@web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com> Date: Mon, 31 Mar 2014 06:28:41 -0700 (PDT) From: Dru Lavigne Subject: Re: en/handbook/audit: proposed corrections To: Taras Korenko , "freebsd-doc@freebsd.org" In-Reply-To: <20140329161905.GB92398@gamma.ukrhub.net> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="2147000914-1361792676-1396272521=:45856" X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list Reply-To: Dru Lavigne List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 31 Mar 2014 13:28:48 -0000 --2147000914-1361792676-1396272521=:45856 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable _______________________________=0A=0A> From: Taras Korenko = =0A>To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org =0A>Sent: Saturday, March 29, 2014 12:19 PM= =0A>Subject: en/handbook/audit: proposed corrections=0A> =0A>=0A>=A0 Good d= ay, doc@ folks.=0A>=0A>=A0 There're a few things that could be improved wit= hin audit chapter of our=0A>handbook.=A0 However, those are just notes, whi= ch might require more polishing=0A>or wordsmithing.=A0 So, can anyone revie= w and/or comment the following *.diff?=0A=0A=0A=0AThanks, Taras.=0A=0AA sli= ghtly modified patch is attached. 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