From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Feb 21 08:10:01 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9AEEE16A406 for ; Thu, 21 Feb 2008 08:10:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7A8EB13C458 for ; Thu, 21 Feb 2008 08:10:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.2/8.14.2) with ESMTP id m1L8A1oY019269 for ; Thu, 21 Feb 2008 08:10:01 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.2/8.14.1/Submit) id m1L8A1GH019268; Thu, 21 Feb 2008 08:10:01 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Thu, 21 Feb 2008 08:10:01 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200802210810.m1L8A1GH019268@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, gregory delfly Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8376F16A401 for ; Thu, 21 Feb 2008 08:02:18 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::21]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 78E7713C4F3 for ; Thu, 21 Feb 2008 08:02:18 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.14.2/8.14.2) with ESMTP id m1L7xiKV082643 for ; Thu, 21 Feb 2008 07:59:44 GMT (envelope-from nobody@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.14.2/8.14.1/Submit) id m1L7xiMn082642; Thu, 21 Feb 2008 07:59:44 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200802210759.m1L7xiMn082642@www.freebsd.org> Date: Thu, 21 Feb 2008 07:59:44 GMT From: gregory delfly To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.1 Cc: Subject: docs/120925: handbook: typos X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 21 Feb 2008 08:10:01 -0000 >Number: 120925 >Category: docs >Synopsis: handbook: typos >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Thu Feb 21 08:10:01 UTC 2008 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: gregory delfly >Release: 6.3R >Organization: >Environment: >Description: In the "printing" chapter of the handbook, I saw one word which might be lacking (proper English asks for "in addition to", imho). Also, there is a "." inside of a , which is not the usage (in docs). >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: I made a patch correcting those, which is to be applied to "chapter.smgl" in /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/ Patch attached with submission follows: --- chapter.sgml.old 2008-02-21 08:51:36.000000000 +0100 +++ chapter.sgml 2008-02-21 08:52:26.000000000 +0100 @@ -2915,7 +2915,7 @@ Accessing a printer attached directly to a network. The - printer has a network interface in addition (or in place of) a + printer has a network interface in addition to (or in place of) a more conventional serial or parallel interface. Such a printer might work as follows: @@ -3547,7 +3547,7 @@ printers. Like disk quotas, the accounting is immediate. You can prevent users from printing when their account goes in the red, and might provide a way for users to check and adjust their - print quotas. But this method requires some database + print quotas. But this method requires some database code to track users and their quotas. >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: