Date: Fri, 23 May 2014 17:36:54 +0000 (UTC) From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44923 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state Message-ID: <201405231736.s4NHasQ6057756@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: bcr Date: Fri May 23 17:36:54 2014 New Revision: 44923 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44923 Log: Capitalize words in title tags, remove redundant words and rewrite one sentence in the process. This makes this file igor clean. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml Fri May 23 17:28:33 2014 (r44922) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml Fri May 23 17:36:54 2014 (r44923) @@ -167,10 +167,10 @@ pseudo-device md # memory those directories. In the execution of <filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename>, one other <filename>rc.conf</filename> variable comes into play – - <literal>varsize</literal>. The - <filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename> file creates a - <filename>/var</filename> partition based on the value of - this variable in <filename>rc.conf</filename>:</para> + <literal>varsize</literal>. A <filename>/var</filename> + partition is created by <filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename> based + on the value of this variable in + <filename>rc.conf</filename>:</para> <programlisting>varsize=8192</programlisting> @@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory logging or temporary file creation and destruction can do the same. Therefore, in addition to removing the <literal>swap</literal> entry from your - <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> file, you should also change the + <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, you should also change the Options field for each filesystem to <literal>ro</literal> as follows:</para> @@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory </sect1> <sect1> - <title>Building a File System From Scratch</title> + <title>Building a File System from Scratch</title> <para>Because ATA compatible compact-flash cards are seen by &os; as normal IDE hard drives, you could theoretically install &os; @@ -251,30 +251,30 @@ pseudo-device md # memory <procedure> <step> - <title>Partitioning your flash media device</title> + <title>Partitioning Your Flash Media Device</title> <para>After booting with the kern and mfsroot floppies, choose <literal>custom</literal> from the installation menu. In the custom installation menu, choose <literal>partition</literal>. In the partition menu, you - should delete all existing partitions using the - <keycap>d</keycap> key. After deleting all existing - partitions, create a partition using the <keycap>c</keycap> - key and accept the default value for the size of the + should delete all existing partitions using + <keycap>d</keycap>. After deleting all existing + partitions, create a partition using <keycap>c</keycap> + and accept the default value for the size of the partition. When asked for the type of the partition, make sure the value is set to <literal>165</literal>. Now write - this partition table to the disk by pressing the - <keycap>w</keycap> key (this is a hidden option on this + this partition table to the disk by pressing + <keycap>w</keycap> (this is a hidden option on this screen). If you are using an ATA compatible compact flash card, you should choose the &os; Boot Manager. Now press - the <keycap>q</keycap> key to quit the partition menu. You + <keycap>q</keycap> to quit the partition menu. You will be shown the boot manager menu once more - repeat the choice you made earlier.</para> </step> <step> - <title>Creating filesystems on your flash memory - device</title> + <title>Creating Filesystems on Your Flash Memory + Device</title> <para>Exit the custom installation menu, and from the main installation menu choose the <literal>fixit</literal> @@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory </step> <step> - <title>Placing your filesystem on the flash media</title> + <title>Placing Your Filesystem on the Flash Media</title> <para>Mount the newly prepared flash media:</para> @@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory the Apache web server will be provided.</para> <sect2> - <title>cron</title> + <title>Cron</title> <para>Upon boot, <filename>/var</filename> gets populated by <filename>/etc/rc.d/var</filename> using the list from @@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory </sect2> <sect2> - <title>syslog</title> + <title>Syslog</title> <para><filename>syslog.conf</filename> specifies the locations of certain log files that exist in
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