Date: Sun, 23 Sep 2001 14:18:54 +0300 From: Giorgos Keramidas <charon@labs.gr> To: Rahul Siddharthan <rsidd@physics.iisc.ernet.in> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: docs/30749: Typo in the handbook's section 14.3 Message-ID: <20010923141853.A18308@hades.hell.gr> In-Reply-To: <200109230830.f8N8U1l60408@freefall.freebsd.org> References: <200109230830.f8N8U1l60408@freefall.freebsd.org>
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Rahul Siddharthan <rsidd@physics.iisc.ernet.in> wrote: >Shill said on Sep 22, 2001 at 16:08:33: >> >> In the handbook's section 14.3: >> http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x13973.html >> >> "After adding the driver(s) you need to your kernel configuration file" >> -> delete "you need" (?) > > What's wrong with it as it stands? (I'm not sure whether, strictly > speaking, a "which" is required before "you need" but it's common > usage as it is.) ... "that you need", "which you need", are both valid alternate forms. But it seems ok as it is. Does this really have to change? -giorgos To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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