Date: Wed, 1 Oct 2003 15:15:33 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: Jim Brown <jpb@sixshooter.v6.thrupoint.net> Cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Quick review requested Message-ID: <20031001151533.2ee29ba5.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20031001003637.GB84749@sixshooter.v6.thrupoint.net> References: <20030930180215.7438ba73.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <20031001003637.GB84749@sixshooter.v6.thrupoint.net>
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On Tue, 30 Sep 2003 20:36:37 -0400 Jim Brown <jpb@sixshooter.v6.thrupoint.net> wrote: > * Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> [2003-09-30 18:03]: > > Gang, > > > > I'd really appreciate some feedback on the text below. If anyone > > would like the full patch (images, Makefile, etc) please speak up > > and I'll send it. > > > > Whitespace in added text will be fixed before the initial cvs ci, > > so comments on short/long lines are not required. > > > > Thanks! > > > > -- > > Tom Rhodes > > > > > Comments inline- sorry. I don't have my doc stuff set up on this system > so I can't check what it looks like visually. > Thank you Jim, and everyone who sent me comments either on list or off. They are always extremely helpful in noticing my sometimes trivial mistakes. -- Tom Rhodes
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