Skip site navigation (1)Skip section navigation (2)
Date:      Sun, 23 Apr 2023 09:31:08 +0000
From:      Lorenzo Salvadore <developer@lorenzosalvadore.it>
To:        Lorenzo Salvadore <salvadore@FreeBSD.org>
Cc:        doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re: git: 47b7701125 - main - fdp-primer/writing-style: Fix section level
Message-ID:  <oS_Fc1pZYtbkHhOpCA3Baa7O8Y-WsB9zxVewAgp63V09neWk7WAxlwX9iJRJqiEuFMDIjeizndWc-lw8F3TNTv0misZy4tYDbnhIap_eOQc=@lorenzosalvadore.it>
In-Reply-To: <202304230930.33N9U0KK087402@gitrepo.freebsd.org>
References:  <202304230930.33N9U0KK087402@gitrepo.freebsd.org>

next in thread | previous in thread | raw e-mail | index | archive | help

------- Original Message -------
On Sunday, April 23rd, 2023 at 11:30 AM, Lorenzo Salvadore <salvadore@FreeBSD.org> wrote:


> 
> 
> The branch main has been updated by salvadore:
> 
> URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=47b7701125a7ef4157cfa9e8318d61b6663175bb
> 
> commit 47b7701125a7ef4157cfa9e8318d61b6663175bb
> Author: Lorenzo Salvadore salvadore@FreeBSD.org
> 
> AuthorDate: 2023-04-23 09:06:59 +0000
> Commit: Lorenzo Salvadore salvadore@FreeBSD.org
> 
> CommitDate: 2023-04-23 09:29:38 +0000
> 
> fdp-primer/writing-style: Fix section level
> 
> Acronyms are not a subtopic of the one sentence per line technique, so
> it does not make sense to have them in a subsection of the "One sentence
> per line" section.

Approved by: doceng (blanket)

> ---
> documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/_index.adoc | 2 +-
> 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/_index.adoc
> index f5b6904c1e..6fb569e607 100644
> --- a/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/_index.adoc
> +++ b/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/_index.adoc
> @@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ They are endowed with reason and conscience and should act towards one another i
> ....
> 
> [[writing-style-acronyms]]
> -=== Acronyms
> +== Acronyms
> 
> Acronyms should be defined the first time they appear in a document, as in: "Network Time Protocol (NTP)".
> After the acronym has been defined, use the acronym alone unless it makes more sense contextually to use the whole term.



Want to link to this message? Use this URL: <https://mail-archive.FreeBSD.org/cgi/mid.cgi?oS_Fc1pZYtbkHhOpCA3Baa7O8Y-WsB9zxVewAgp63V09neWk7WAxlwX9iJRJqiEuFMDIjeizndWc-lw8F3TNTv0misZy4tYDbnhIap_eOQc=>