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Date:      Sat, 15 Jun 2002 14:21:26 -0700
From:      "Bruce Newland" <newlandb@corp.earthlink.net>
To:        <doc@FreeBSD.org>
Subject:   Error on doc web page
Message-ID:  <000501c214b2$9be6e5d0$0601a8c0@amd>

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Morning guys,
Just happened to notice a error in grammar here:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/releng/article.html#vers
ionbump
The last sentence doesn't quite make sense. Is there supposed to be a "more"
at the location I marked with *? and a "than" at the second *?

6 Future Directions
It is imperative for our release engineering activities to scale with our
growing userbase. Along these lines we are working very hard to document the
procedures involved in producing FreeBSD releases.
Parallelism - Certain portions of the release build are actually
``embarrassingly parallel''. Most of the tasks are very I/O intensive, so
multiple high-speed disk drives is actually * important that*(than)?
multiple processors in speeding up the ``make release'' process.

Thanks for such a great product.
Bruce Newland
Service Quality Manager, EarthLink


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