Date: Mon, 18 Mar 2013 19:16:55 -0000 From: sib@tormail.org To: fbsd8@a1poweruser.com Cc: freebsd-jail@freebsd.org Subject: Handbook Jail Chapter rewrite available for critique Message-ID: <1UHfYF-000LVV-4Y@internal.tormail.org>
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On Mon, Mar 18, 2013 at 2:38 PM, Fbsd8 <fbsd8@a1poweruser.com> wrote: > To all interested parties; > > I have completed the final draft of the total rewrite of FreeBSD's > handbook Chapter 16 on Jails. > > Before submitting my work for submission to the documentation group for > insertion in the handbook I am looking for critique of the work to find > errors in concept, wrong use of words, or anything to make it better. > > All feedback welcomed. Please email me directly so we keep the noise down on the mailing list. > > Use this URL to access it http://www.jails.a1poweruser.com/ > > > Thank You. Hi. Has the documentation team approved any of this already? I've noticed a few mistakes ("Then about RELEASE 5.4," "from malice actions on a Local Are Network," spelling/grammar mistakes, many others) so I'm assuming not. I also see you're pushing the sysutils/qjail port for users who don't want to configure things themselves. In my experience, ezjail is a much better solution. I also see that you are the maintainer/author of qjail and like to shovel your opinion as the only solution, both in this "rewrite" and all over the FreeBSD forums. Do we even need an updated version? I trust the documentation team to write one much more than a biased port maintainer with a poor grasp of English. It's not my native language either, but this needs some serious work. >Please email me directly so we keep the noise down on the mailing list. This is funny.
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