Date: Thu, 30 May 2002 00:47:47 +0300 From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> To: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: (man page || manpage) => manual page Message-ID: <20020529214746.GA67346@hades.hell.gr>
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Hello there, Nice to see someone has taken it upon himself to finish the job I left in the middle (by completing only the articles/ part) a while ago. > config file with the appropriate entries. See the > - <samp>stl(4)</samp> man page and the appropriate section of the > + <samp>stl(4)</samp> manual page and the appropriate section of the When &man.xxx.y; references are being made I prefer the style that Jeroen suggested to me a long time ago. Instead of writing: "see the foo(n) manpage" You can simply use "see foo(n)", since it should be apparent that this is a reference to a manual page. Repeating in every such place that it "is a manual page" is a bit of an overkill. > would generate such a set of context diffs for the given > - source file or directory hierarchy. See the man page for > + source file or directory hierarchy. See the manual page for > &man.diff.1; for more details.</para> Another example of a case where dropping "manpage" altogether gives actually more aesthetically pleasing results. Compare the text above with the following: See diff(1) for more details. > <para>This chapter was written by &a.murray; with selections from a > - variety of sources including the intro(4) man page by > + variety of sources including the intro(4) manual page by > &a.joerg;.</para> I guess this can safely be replaced with &man.intro.4;. > - handbook, the man page or from the ppp.conf.sample file. > + handbook, the manual page or from the ppp.conf.sample file. Now that I see this... You might want after you've done the manpage changes to wrap ppp.conf.sample in <filename> tags. Or I'll do it, but in a few days, to avoid making you merge stuff again and again. > Additional encoding options can be found by consulting the > - lame man page.</para> > + lame manual page.</para> Since `lame' is used in IRC to denote 'silly', 'idiot', or similar, you will probably want to change this part. Make it something like: by consulting <citerefentry> <refentrytitle>lame</refentrytitle> <manvolnum>1</manvolnum> </citerefentry>. This emulates the functionality of &man.lame.1;. You can even make this a local entity in the file that references the manpage, by adding to the <!DOCTYPE> element the proper stuff: [ <!ENTITY man.lame.1 "<citerefentry/<refentrytitle/lame/<manvolnum/1//"> ] and then using &man.lame.1; as usual. > -in your ppp configuration file (refer to the man page for details).</para> > +in your ppp configuration file (refer to the manual page for details).</para> I would make the manpage reference more explicit here, and use &man.ppp.1; in the parenthesized text: ... (refer to &man.ppp.1; for details).</para> Well, that's all. I hope it hasn't started to get annoying yet ;) - Giorgos To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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