Date: Fri, 30 Jul 2004 08:20:18 +0200 From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: A problem in Handbook's Common Tasks part Message-ID: <20040730062018.GB21106@abigail.blackend.org>
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Hello, I found something "annoying" in the introduction of the Common Tasks part, I read: "Describe the X Window System in more detail, and introduce you to modern desktop environments such as GNOME and KDE." The X Window System, GNOME and KDE are described in X11 chapter of the previous part "Getting Started". Since this sentence seems refering to the desktop chapter, I'd see something like: "Introduce you to popular and usesul desktop applications: browsers, productivity tools, document viewers, etc." instead of the current sentence. Well someone should be able to find a better text than mine :) Marc
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