Date: Mon, 23 Oct 2006 15:56:29 +0400 From: Yar Tikhiy <yar@comp.chem.msu.su> To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: New article Message-ID: <20061023115629.GB87535@comp.chem.msu.su> In-Reply-To: <20061018225653.GA1332@gothmog.pc> References: <20061015173531.GB31717@comp.chem.msu.su> <20061018225653.GA1332@gothmog.pc>
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On Thu, Oct 19, 2006 at 01:56:53AM +0300, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > On 2006-10-15 21:35, Yar Tikhiy <yar@comp.chem.msu.su> wrote: > > Hi folks, > > > > I wrote an article on our rc.d subsystem. Its draft in sgml and > > html is available at http://people.freebsd.org/~yar/rcng/ . It has > > been reviewed on freebsd-rc. Now I'd like to add it to our article > > collection. I see that I should commit the article itself, then > > update www/docs/books.sgml. What else? > > > > P.S. Please feel free to review my article WRT its markup. Thanks! > > Hi Yar, > > First of all, *THANKS*! > > This is a great article, and I really enjoyed reading it. One of my > latest commits to doc/ was, in fact, inspired by this article: I'm much pleased to hear that my humble work was useful to you! > Having said that, as I was going through the article, I noticed a few > places where I would probably word things in a slightly different way. > I am not sure if all my changes are ok, but the attached patch shows all > the changes I have made locally. Thank you for the patch! Although I didn't apply all its parts verbatim, the patch showed me quite a number of rough corners still in my article. I did my best to polish them. The revised version is ready at http://people.freebsd.org/~yar/rcng/ . > This is still a work-in-progress, as I am going a second time through > the article, looking for things which I would write in a different way, > or for things which seem cool to add. I'm not done, yet, but here is a > first patch version, so we can work in parallel ;) Your help is much appreciated! > If you like any of the changes, feel free to import them in your own > copy of the article. Please, also let em know if you need help while > committing this to doc/. I can commit to doc by myself, and I'd like to, but would you mind telling me what I should do apart from committing the article itself, connecting it to the build via ../Makefile, and adding a reference to the Books & Articles Online webpage? By the way, what short title would you suggest for the article? Does "rc-scripting" look good? -- Yar
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