Date: Fri, 15 Jun 2012 22:09:24 +0200 From: Pawel Jakub Dawidek <pjd@FreeBSD.org> To: "John W. O'Brien" <john@saltant.com> Cc: freebsd-geom@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Scope and purpose of each kind geli key Message-ID: <20120615200924.GE1399@garage.freebsd.pl> In-Reply-To: <4FDB16B4.4060705@saltant.com> References: <4FD3B8D5.7030906@saltant.com> <20120610081337.GL1379@garage.freebsd.pl> <4FDB16B4.4060705@saltant.com>
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--Q0rSlbzrZN6k9QnT Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Fri, Jun 15, 2012 at 07:04:20AM -0400, John W. O'Brien wrote: > Ready to entertain comments on the man page round from freebsd-geom@ > or pjd@. >=20 > docs/169089 > [geli] [PATCH] geli(8) needs clarity concerning key scope/type/purpose > http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=3D169089 Thanks. Could you send the patch here, in your mail? It would be easier to comment on selected parts only. At a glance content seems ok, you just need to polish style a bit. For example in manual pages period ends the line - new setence has to start from new line. You also didn't merge some short lines after your changes. Maybe you could fix that and resend there patch here for final review? --=20 Pawel Jakub Dawidek http://www.wheelsystems.com FreeBSD committer http://www.FreeBSD.org Am I Evil? Yes, I Am! http://tupytaj.pl --Q0rSlbzrZN6k9QnT Content-Type: application/pgp-signature -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2.0.19 (FreeBSD) iEYEARECAAYFAk/blnMACgkQForvXbEpPzTMKQCdGxNji0YzTB6c2J1SsNN2rJ4P rmQAoMy1XEtnrOtr+QSz42TC+4OcI4OH =tpFb -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --Q0rSlbzrZN6k9QnT--
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