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Date:      Mon, 7 Feb 2005 18:27:10 -0700 (MST)
From:      "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net>
To:        FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   www/77241: [PATCH] fixes on www/en/commercial/software.xml	
Message-ID:  <200502080127.j181RAEi033281@opensea.cox.net>
Resent-Message-ID: <200502080130.j181UFsn065630@freefall.freebsd.org>

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>Number:         77241
>Category:       www
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] fixes on www/en/commercial/software.xml
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    freebsd-www
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Feb 08 01:30:14 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD opensea.cox.net 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #4: Sun Jan 30 06:26:38 MST 2005 root@opensea.cox.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/OPENSEA i386

>Description:

	Correct some words in some paragraphs.   

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

--- software.xml.diff begins here ---
Index: software.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/www/en/commercial/software.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.7 software.xml
--- software.xml	28 Sep 2004 23:14:57 -0000	1.7
+++ software.xml	8 Feb 2005 01:15:09 -0000
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@
       applications with higher level products such as Microsoft Access and
       Crystal Reports. The FairCom toolset is completed with
       <em>r-tree</em>, a powerful report generator and the powerful FairCom
-      server, with heterogenous network support, which allows dissimilar
+      server, with heterogeneous network support, which allows dissimilar
       clients to attach to one platform and easily migrate to over 20
       supported platforms, from FreeBSD to Windows to Mac. For more
       information, please visit <a
@@ -753,10 +753,10 @@
       protection for your file and application servers and gateways running
       FreeBSD. Kaspersky Anti-Virus for FreeBSD includes the most complete
       set of anti-virus tools that will help you to build a multi-level
-      defence system against attacks of malicious code of any type,
+      defense system against attacks of malicious code of any type,
       including computer viruses, Internet worms and Trojan horses. The
       package includes an anti-virus scanner for on-demand check for
-      viruses on data storages (local and network); an anti-virus daemon
+      viruses on data storage devices (local and network); an anti-virus daemon
       that filters data from viruses in real-time mode. Kaspersky
       Anti-Virus for FreeBSD offers an interactive configuration program
       and a utility for automatic anti-virus database updates download. The
--- software.xml.diff ends here ---


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