Date: Sat, 04 Feb 2006 17:15:59 -0500 (EST) From: Alec Berryman <alec@thened.net> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/92826: [patch] Punctuation and grammar fix for article "hats" Message-ID: <20060204221559.9D0AFC022@shredder.bowdoin.edu> Resent-Message-ID: <200602042220.k14MK3Qe053090@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 92826 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] Punctuation and grammar fix for article "hats" >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Feb 04 22:20:02 GMT 2006 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Alec Berryman >Release: FreeBSD 6.0-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD shredder.bowdoin.edu 6.0-STABLE FreeBSD 6.0-STABLE #0: Sat Jan 21 01:26:30 EST 2006 root@shredder.bowdoin.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/SERVER i386 >Description: Missing a period between sentences and subject/verb mismatch. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- hats-punctuation-grammer.diff begins here --- Index: article.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hats/article.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.8 diff -u -r1.8 article.sgml --- article.sgml 8 Aug 2004 13:43:55 -0000 1.8 +++ article.sgml 4 Feb 2006 21:59:44 -0000 @@ -79,11 +79,11 @@ <para>Hats are answerable to core. If they are doing good jobs, core will leave them alone. If they are doing a bad job, core has the option to remove them. Hats are expected to work with core if - core has issues with their performance of their duties They serve + core has issues with their performance of their duties. They serve at the pleasure of core.</para> <para>Core sometimes will impose additional, specific requirements - for a given hat that does not apply to all hats. These conditions + for a given hat that do not apply to all hats. These conditions may change over time.</para> <para>Committers and others working with hats are expected to use --- hats-punctuation-grammer.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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