Date: Sat, 24 Nov 2012 22:57:34 +0000 (UTC) From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r40148 - projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports Message-ID: <201211242257.qAOMvY7V041483@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: gjb Date: Sat Nov 24 22:57:34 2012 New Revision: 40148 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40148 Log: '8.0' should not be within <replaceable> tags. s/Those/Such/ Misc wordsmithing. Submitted by: bjk, wblock Modified: projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Modified: projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Sat Nov 24 07:12:46 2012 (r40147) +++ projects/pkgng/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Sat Nov 24 22:57:34 2012 (r40148) @@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ docbook = <para>The <application>pkgng</application> package management utility is not supported on &os; 7.<replaceable>X</replaceable> or - &os; 8.<replaceable>0</replaceable>.</para> + &os; 8.0.</para> </note> <para>Existing &os; installations require conversion of the @@ -904,7 +904,7 @@ Upgrading curl from 7.24.0 to 7.24.0_1.. <para>Removing a package may leave behind unnecessary dependencies, like <filename role="package">security/ca_root_nss</filename> in the example - above. Those packages are still installed, but nothing + above. Such packages are still installed, but nothing depends on them any more. Unneeded packages that were installed as dependencies can be automatically detected and removed:</para> @@ -966,7 +966,7 @@ Deinstalling ca_root_nss-3.13.5... done< versions of the upgraded packages are not automatically removed.</para> - <para>To remove the outdated binary packages from the system, + <para>To remove the outdated binary packages, run:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pkg clean</userinput></screen>
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