Date: Thu, 14 Mar 2013 20:38:42 -0400 From: Eitan Adler <lists@eitanadler.com> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: FAQ Introduction and Abstract Message-ID: <CAF6rxgmPp0YpvHuK65zWiX9Ha0xMOq4XYSiQNAysXLH5VpP3BQ@mail.gmail.com>
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Anyone have thoughts on the following? commit 77849693306b6dc0698ac45a4173d43f419e97e9 Author: Eitan Adler <lists@eitanadler.com> Date: Thu Mar 14 20:37:13 2013 -0400 Remove duplicate text from the introduction and move it into the abstract. Simplify some of the text from both sections. Reviewed by: doc Approved by: ??? (mentor) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml index 8c93f05..df5fa00 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml @@ -73,39 +73,26 @@ <releaseinfo>$FreeBSD$</releaseinfo> <abstract> - <para>This is the FAQ for &os; versions - &rel2.relx; and &rel.relx;. - If you are interested in helping with - this project, send email to the &a.doc;. The latest version of + <para>This is the FAQ for &os; versions &rel2.relx; and + &rel.relx;. Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as + informative as possible; if you have any suggestions as to how + it may be improved, please feel free to mail them to the + &a.doc;.</para> + + <para>The latest version of this document is always available from the <ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/index.html">&os; website</ulink>. It may also be downloaded as one large <ulink url="book.html">HTML</ulink> file with HTTP or as a variety of other formats from the <ulink url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/doc/">&os; FTP - server</ulink>. You may also want to <ulink - url="&url.base;/search/index.html">Search the FAQ</ulink>.</para> + server</ulink>.</para> </abstract> </bookinfo> <chapter id="introduction"> <title>Introduction</title> - <para>Welcome to the &os; - &rel2.relx; - and &rel.relx; - - FAQ!</para> - - <para>As is usual with Usenet FAQs, this document aims to cover the - most frequently asked questions concerning the &os; operating - system (and of course answer them!). Although originally intended - to reduce bandwidth and avoid the same old questions being asked - over and over again, FAQs have become recognized as valuable - information resources.</para> - - <para>Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as informative as - possible; if you have any suggestions as to how it may be - improved, please feel free to mail them to the &a.doc;.</para> - <qandaset> <qandaentry> <question id="what-is-FreeBSD"> -- Eitan Adler
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