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Date:      Sun, 28 Oct 2001 11:24:24 +0100 (CET)
From:      Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de>
To:        FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject:   docs/31549: security chapter: corrected typos and mark up
Message-ID:  <200110281024.f9SAOOU06448@Kain.sumuk.de>

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>Number:         31549
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       security chapter: corrected typos and mark up
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Oct 28 02:30:00 PST 2001
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Martin Heinen
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.4-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD Kain.sumuk.de 4.4-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.4-PRERELEASE #11: Thu Sep 27 18:54:33 CEST 2001 toor@Kain.earth.sol:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/KAIN i386


	
>Description:
	Kereberos -> Kerberos,
	<groupname>su -> <command>su,
	inserted missing or,
	return -> <keycap>Return
>How-To-Repeat:
	read the security chapter
>Fix:
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.94
diff -u -r1.94 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	2001/10/23 22:12:45	1.94
+++ chapter.sgml	2001/10/28 10:12:45
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>How to setup Kereberos, another alternative
+	<para>How to setup Kerberos, another alternative
 	  authentication system.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@
 	<groupname>wheel</groupname> group (in
 	<filename>/etc/group</filename>). The staff members placed in the
 	<groupname>wheel</groupname> group are allowed to
-	<groupname>su</groupname> to <username>root</username>.  You should never give staff
+	<command>su</command> to <username>root</username>.  You should never give staff
 	members native wheel access by putting them in the
 	<groupname>wheel</groupname> group in their password entry.  Staff
 	accounts should be placed in a <groupname>staff</groupname> group, and
@@ -1168,7 +1168,7 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>Insecure Connection Initialization</title>
       
-      <para>To initialize change your secret password over an
+      <para>To initialize or change your secret password over an
 	insecure connection, you will need to already have a secure
 	connection to some place where you can run <command>key</command>
         or <command>opiekey</command>; this might be in the form of a
@@ -1209,7 +1209,8 @@
 
       <para>To accept the default seed (which the
 	<command>keyinit</command> program confusingly calls a
-	<literal>key</literal>), press return.  Then before entering an
+	<literal>key</literal>), press <keycap>Return</keycap>.
+	Then before entering an
 	access password, move over to your secure connection or S/Key desk
 	accessory, and give it the same parameters:</para>
 
@@ -1262,7 +1263,8 @@
 Password: </screen>
 
       <para>As a side note, the S/Key and OPIE prompts have a useful feature
-	(not shown here): if you press return at the password prompt, the
+	(not shown here): if you press <keycap>Return</keycap>
+	at the password prompt, the
 	prompter will turn echo on, so you can see what you are
 	typing.  This can be extremely useful if you are attempting to
 	type in a password by hand, such as from a printout.</para>
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