Date: Wed, 23 Jun 2004 11:21:50 +0000 (UTC) From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/relaydelay article.sgml Message-ID: <200406231121.i5NBLoVG095387@repoman.freebsd.org>
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ceri 2004-06-23 11:21:50 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/relaydelay article.sgml
Log:
Rain on Tom's article, like I promised ;-)
o Some minor grammatical and spelling corrections
o Add some comments where I think improvements are desirable, but the
initial intent was not clear to me.
o Correct a URL
Revision Changes Path
1.2 +16 -13 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/relaydelay/article.sgml
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