Date: Fri, 19 May 2017 18:07:28 +0000 (UTC) From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-11@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r318547 - stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes Message-ID: <201705191807.v4JI7SLB047346@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: gjb Date: Fri May 19 18:07:28 2017 New Revision: 318547 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318547 Log: Fix a few grammar and ambiguity nits. Submitted by: adamw Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml ============================================================================== --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Fri May 19 17:14:29 2017 (r318546) +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Fri May 19 18:07:28 2017 (r318547) @@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ <acronym>NAT-T</acronym> configuration. The <literal>-g</literal> and <literal>-t</literal> flags have been added, which list only global and virtual policies, - respectively when used with the <literal>-D</literal> and + respectively, when used with the <literal>-D</literal> and <literal>-P</literal> flags.</para> <para revision="316098" contrib="sponsor" @@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ <para revision="317855">The &man.daemon.8; utility has been updated to allow redirecting &man.stdout.4; and &man.stderr.4; - output to &man.syslog.3; and to a file.</para> + output to &man.syslog.3; or to a file.</para> </sect2> <sect2 xml:id="userland-contrib"> @@ -307,8 +307,8 @@ sponsor="&ff;">&man.blacklistd.8; support for <application>OpenSSH</application> has been refined to adjust notification points to catch all authentication failures - rather than authentication failures caused by invalid - login usernames.</para> + rather than only those caused by invalid login + usernames.</para> </sect2> <sect2 xml:id="userland-installer">
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