Date: Sun, 9 Apr 2017 00:48:25 +0000 (UTC) From: Brad Davis <brd@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r50139 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction Message-ID: <201704090048.v390mPal044514@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: brd Date: Sun Apr 9 00:48:24 2017 New Revision: 50139 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50139 Log: Fix some grammer and a missing apostrophe. PR: 218069 Submitted by: Daniel Petti <djpetti@me.com> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Sun Apr 9 00:38:58 2017 (r50138) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Sun Apr 9 00:48:24 2017 (r50139) @@ -614,7 +614,7 @@ </indexterm> - Stormshield Network Security appliances are based on a hardened version of &os;. The BSD license - allows us to integrate our own intellectual property with + allows them to integrate their own intellectual property with the system while returning a great deal of interesting development to the community.</para> </listitem> @@ -626,7 +626,7 @@ <primary>The Weather Channel</primary> </indexterm> - The IntelliStar appliance that is installed - at each local cable providers headend and is responsible + at each local cable provider's headend and is responsible for injecting local weather forecasts into the cable TV network's programming runs &os;.</para> </listitem>
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