Date: Fri, 16 Dec 2016 23:28:17 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r49744 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms Message-ID: <201612162328.uBGNSHdC047783@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Fri Dec 16 23:28:17 2016 New Revision: 49744 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/49744 Log: Cleanup from linimon's patch along with some improvenating of Englishification. PR: 213060 Submitted by: linimon Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml Fri Dec 16 22:29:39 2016 (r49743) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/platforms/sparc.xml Fri Dec 16 23:28:17 2016 (r49744) @@ -39,12 +39,12 @@ <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/archs.html"> Tier 2</a> architecture, and as such is not fully supported by the <a href="&base;">FreeBSD</a> project. Although fully functional, the port - is not as mature as the existing i386 or amd64 ports.</p> + is not as feature-complete as the i386 or amd64 ports.</p> <h3><a name="hw">Hardware List</a></h3> <p>A summary of supported systems follows. SMP is supported on all supported - systems that contain more than 1 processor. For full details please see + systems that contain more than 1 processor. For full details, please see the <a href="&base;/releases/&rel.current;R/hardware.html"> hardware notes</a> of the <a href="&base;/releases/"> @@ -87,8 +87,8 @@ <li>Sun Ultra 450</li> </ul> - <p>The following systems are partially supported by FreeBSD. In - particular the fibre channel controllers in SBus-based systems are not + <p>These systems are partially supported by FreeBSD. In particular, + the fibre channel controllers in SBus-based systems are not supported. However, it is possible to use these with a SCSI controller supported by the esp(4) driver (Sun ESP SCSI, Sun FAS Fast-SCSI and Sun FAS366 Fast-Wide SCSI controllers).</p> @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ <p>Starting with 7.2-RELEASE, sparc64 systems based on Sun UltraSPARC III and beyond are also supported by FreeBSD, which includes - the following known working systems:</p> + these known working systems:</p> <ul> <li>Sun Blade 1000</li> @@ -124,8 +124,8 @@ <li>Sun Netra 20/Netra T4</li> </ul> - <p>The following Sun UltraSPARC systems are not tested but - believed to be also supported by FreeBSD:</p> + <p>These Sun UltraSPARC systems are not tested but are + believed to also be supported by FreeBSD:</p> <ul> <li>Sun Fire V125</li> @@ -134,15 +134,15 @@ </ul> <p>Starting with 7.4-RELEASE and 8.1-RELEASE, sparc64 systems based on Fujitsu SPARC64 V - are also supported by FreeBSD, which includes the following + are also supported by FreeBSD, which includes these known working systems:</p> <ul> <li>Fujitsu PRIMEPOWER® 250</li> </ul> - <p>The following Fujitsu SPARC64 systems are not tested but believed to be - also supported by FreeBSD:</p> + <p>These Fujitsu SPARC64 systems have not been tested but are believed to + also be supported by FreeBSD:</p> <ul> <li>Fujitsu PRIMEPOWER 450</li> @@ -150,20 +150,9 @@ <li>Fujitsu PRIMEPOWER 850</li> </ul> - <p>If you have a system that is not listed here please try it, and let + <p>If you have a system that is not listed here, please try it and let <a href="mailto:freebsd-sparc@FreeBSD.org">us</a> know about it.</p> - <h3><a name="who">Credits</a></h3> - - <p>The following people have been working either in the spotlights or behind - the scenes to get the FreeBSD port off the ground:</p> - - <ul> - <li>&a.jake.email;</li> - <li>&a.tmm.email;</li> - <li>&a.obrien.email;</li> - </ul> - <h3><a name="list">FreeBSD/sparc64 mailing list</a></h3> <p>To subscribe to this list, send an email to <tt class="
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