Date: Tue, 5 Dec 2006 13:53:54 +0300 (MSK) From: Dmitry Morozovsky <marck@rinet.ru> To: Doug Barton <dougb@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml Message-ID: <20061205135214.K72517@woozle.rinet.ru> In-Reply-To: <4574A587.3050903@FreeBSD.org> References: <200612041443.kB4EhpBG035838@repoman.freebsd.org> <4574A587.3050903@FreeBSD.org>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] On Mon, 4 Dec 2006, Doug Barton wrote: DB> > Modified files: DB> > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml DB> > Log: DB> > A class C network for 192.168.0.0/24 includes the address DB> > range 192.168.0.0-192.168.0.255, not 192.168.0.0-192.168.255.255 DB> > DB> > Submitted by: Tom Van Looy <tom@ctors.net> DB> > DB> > Revision Changes Path DB> > 1.338 +1 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml DB> > DB> > http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml.diff?&r1=1.337&r2=1.338&f=h DB> > DB> DB> In an ideal world, all references to Class [ABC] networks would DB> disappear from our docs, and be replaced by their CIDR equivalents. There are suprisingly small number of such places. What do you think about the patch attached? Sincerely, D.Marck [DM5020, MCK-RIPE, DM3-RIPN] ------------------------------------------------------------------------ *** Dmitry Morozovsky --- D.Marck --- Wild Woozle --- marck@rinet.ru *** ------------------------------------------------------------------------ [-- Attachment #2 --] Index: articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.20 diff -u -r1.20 article.sgml --- articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml 8 Aug 2004 13:43:54 -0000 1.20 +++ articles/filtering-bridges/article.sgml 5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000 @@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ <devicename>xl0</devicename> towards the inside (<acronym>LAN</acronym>). The bridge machine has the IP <hostid role="ipaddr">1.2.3.4</hostid> (it is not possible that your - <acronym>ISP</acronym> can give you a class A address like this, but for + <acronym>ISP</acronym> can give you an address quite like this, but for our example it is good).</para> <programlisting># Things that we have kept state on before get to go through in a hurry Index: books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.338 diff -u -r1.338 chapter.sgml --- books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml 4 Dec 2006 14:43:50 -0000 1.338 +++ books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml 5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000 @@ -2356,7 +2356,7 @@ <listitem> <para>The address block being used for this local area - network is a Class C block + network is a (historical) Class C block (<hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0</hostid> - <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.255</hostid>). The default netmask is for a Class C network Index: books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.173 diff -u -r1.173 chapter.sgml --- books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml 30 May 2006 23:08:24 -0000 1.173 +++ books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml 5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000 @@ -760,7 +760,7 @@ <para>For example, if you have three dialup customers, <username>fred</username>, <username>sam</username>, and - <username>mary</username>, that you route class C networks + <username>mary</username>, that you route /24 CIDR networks for, you would type the following:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ln -s /etc/ppp/ppp-shell /etc/ppp/ppp-fred</userinput> @@ -827,7 +827,7 @@ should also contain routing information for each static IP user if required. The line below would add a route for the <hostid role="ipaddr">203.14.101.0</hostid> - class C via the client's ppp link.</para> + /24 CIDR network via the client's ppp link.</para> <programlisting>fred: add 203.14.101.0 netmask 255.255.255.0 HISADDR
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