Date: Mon, 1 Oct 2012 13:34:28 -0400 From: Eitan Adler <lists@eitanadler.com> To: Cpet Services <cpetservice@gmail.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Updates to features.html Message-ID: <CAF6rxgm4r4FEtNi8Gsmn1Wj8UO4Dga5PvpPR_quB=x%2B-FhnbDw@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <CA%2BhK6ZkkxLddTsNx85zuRT44TJpJsc1p4uMq%2B%2BG44rU8W63F9g@mail.gmail.com> References: <CA%2BhK6ZkkxLddTsNx85zuRT44TJpJsc1p4uMq%2B%2BG44rU8W63F9g@mail.gmail.com>
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On 1 October 2012 11:00, Cpet Services <cpetservice@gmail.com> wrote: > I am trying to update features.html. Please look at > http://cpet.multics.org/freebsddocs/data/features.html General comments: This page should be aimed at people that may have heard of FreeBSD but are not current users. As such avoid using FreeBSD terminology or giving configuration information. This of this as a marketing document, not a technical one. Specific comments: ""Over ten years of work have been put into..." - its a bit older than 10 years now ;) "FreeBSD 1/i386 a.out binaries on FreeBSD/amd64" - pretty cool, but a feature? Hhook - the description is pretty technical, and presupposes knowledge of pfil(9) - perhaps some more general text is needed? Accounting API - no need to specify how to enable it - perhaps make this a link to the handbook page. Actually it would be cool if *all* the headers were links to handbook pages. I didn't look in detail past the 9.0 section. > And tell me what you think of it. Thanks for working on this: this is one of the most important pages on the website! I hope that your work makes it in. Have you seen http://wiki.freebsd.org/WhatsNew/FreeBSD10 as well? -- Eitan Adler
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