Date: Sun, 13 Feb 2011 21:09:47 -0500 (EST) From: Sahil Tandon <sahil@FreeBSD.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Cc: jhelfman@experts-exchange.com, doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/154766: [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article Message-ID: <20110214020947.211821711F@spartan.hamla.org> Resent-Message-ID: <201102140210.p1E2A7RG063973@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 154766
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Mon Feb 14 02:10:06 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Sahil Tandon
>Release: FreeBSD 9.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
- Fix two small typos
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- freebsd-update-server.diff begins here ---
Index: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml
--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml 13 Feb 2011 17:53:26 -0000 1.1
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml 14 Feb 2011 02:02:53 -0000
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
url="&url.base;/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/projects/freebsd-update-server/">freebsd-update-server</ulink> software
is written by &a.cperciva;, current Security Officer of &os;.
For users that think it is convenient to update their systems
- against an official update server, building an own &fbus.ap; may
+ against an official update server, building their own &fbus.ap; may
help to extend its functionality by supporting manually-tweaked
&os; releases or by providing a local mirror that will allow faster
updates for a number of machines.</para>
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
It is sourced during all build operations.</para>
<para>Here is the default <filename>build.conf</filename>, which should
- be modified to suite your own environment.</para>
+ be modified to suit your own environment.</para>
<programlisting>
--- freebsd-update-server.diff ends here ---
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