Date: Tue, 21 Sep 2004 12:55:39 +0300 From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> To: "David O'Brien" <obrien@freebsd.org> Cc: cvs-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: www/en index.xsl Message-ID: <20040921095539.GE4451@orion.daedalusnetworks.priv> In-Reply-To: <20040921074025.GA1368@dragon.nuxi.com> References: <200409201934.i8KJYfcS036447@repoman.freebsd.org> <20040921.054126.07648742.hrs@eos.ocn.ne.jp> <20040920211839.GA15066@hub.freebsd.org> <200409201753.18974.jhb@FreeBSD.org> <20040921074025.GA1368@dragon.nuxi.com>
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On 2004-09-21 00:40, David O'Brien <obrien@freebsd.org> wrote: > > Sounds reasonable. > > Index: index.xsl > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/dcvs/www/en/index.xsl,v > retrieving revision 1.108 > diff -u -r1.108 index.xsl > --- index.xsl 20 Sep 2004 19:34:41 -0000 1.108 > +++ index.xsl 21 Sep 2004 07:39:37 -0000 > @@ -135,8 +135,8 @@ > <h2><font color="#990000">What is FreeBSD?</font></h2> > > <p>FreeBSD is an advanced operating system for > - x86 compatible, AMD64 compatible, Alpha, IA-64, PC-98 > - and UltraSPARC® architectures. > + x86 compatible, x86-64 (aka. AMD64) compatible, Alpha/AXP, > + IA-64, PC-98 and UltraSPARC® architectures. > It is derived from BSD, the version of <xsl:value-of select="$unix"/> > developed at > the University of California, Berkeley. This one seems nice. It's hard to see the real changes if wrapping is redone though. The contraction `aka' is probably something we'd like to avoid too. How about this one? : <p>FreeBSD is an advanced operating system for : - x86 compatible, AMD64 compatible, Alpha, IA-64, PC-98 : + x86 compatible, x86-64 or AMD64 compatible, Alpha/AXP, IA-64, PC-98 : and UltraSPARC® architectures.
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