Date: Tue, 18 Nov 2014 01:40:08 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r45994 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook: porting-dads quick-porting security upgrading versions Message-ID: <201411180140.sAI1e86L004314@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 New Revision: 45994 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45994 Log: Minor edits for clarity and style. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:24:53 2014 (r45993) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 (r45994) @@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ exec %%LOCALBASE%%/bin/java -jar %%DATAD Construct</title> <para>The correct way for a <filename>Makefile</filename> to - signal that the port can not be installed due to some external + signal that the port cannot be installed due to some external factor (for instance, the user has specified an illegal combination of build options) is to set a non-blank value to <varname>IGNORE</varname>. This value will be formatted and Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:24:53 2014 (r45993) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 (r45994) @@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ lib/X11/oneko/mouse.xpm</programlisting> Add a short description of the program to the Description field of the PR (perhaps a short version of <varname>COMMENT</varname>), and - don't forget to add <filename>oneko.shar</filename> as an + do not forget to add <filename>oneko.shar</filename> as an attachment.</para> <note> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:24:53 2014 (r45993) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 (r45994) @@ -41,9 +41,9 @@ system often assists attackers to break into other systems that could not be compromised otherwise. Therefore closing a vulnerability alone is not enough: notify the audience - of it in most clear and comprehensive manner, which - will allow to evaluate the danger and take appropriate - actions.</para> + of it in the most clear and comprehensive manner, which + will allow them to evaluate the danger and take appropriate + action.</para> </sect1> <sect1 xml:id="security-fix"> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:24:53 2014 (r45993) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 (r45994) @@ -337,9 +337,9 @@ <para>This file is used to list moved or removed ports. Each line in the file is made - up of the name of the port, where the port was moved to, when, + up of the name of the port, where the port was moved, when, and why. If the port was removed, the section detailing where - it was moved to can be left blank. Each section must be + it was moved can be left blank. Each section must be separated by the <literal>|</literal> (pipe) character, like so:</para> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:24:53 2014 (r45993) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml Tue Nov 18 01:40:08 2014 (r45994) @@ -5503,7 +5503,7 @@ <entry>1100037</entry> <entry>October 6, 2014</entry> <entry>11.0-CURRENT after addition of - &man.explicit.bzero.3;. (rev + &man.explicit.bzero.3; (rev <revnumber>272673</revnumber>).</entry> </row>
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