Date: Thu, 14 Aug 2003 03:11:29 -0700 (PDT) From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200308141011.h7EABTja025936@repoman.freebsd.org>
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blackend 2003/08/14 03:11:29 PDT
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml
Log:
Last sweep on OpenSSH section:
- Some tagging: OpenSSH is an <application> (set of tools), SSH is the
protocol so no tags and use uppercase, the other cases are <command>
(or use of manual page entities)
- s/Secure shell/OpenSSH/, which is less confusing, and some
s/SSH/OpenSSH/ where needed
- Use application tags for telnet since we talk in a "general way"
- s/Draconian/draconian/ in a sentence.
Revision Changes Path
1.172 +17 -17 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
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