Date: Mon, 1 Oct 2012 14:48:12 -0500 From: Cpet Services <cpetservice@gmail.com> To: Eitan Adler <lists@eitanadler.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Updates to features.html Message-ID: <CA%2BhK6ZkERMf9c%2BP4Aq_D57%2B7m%2B=tGyHYJYUeTJTRHiW=HT9RaQ@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <CAF6rxgm4r4FEtNi8Gsmn1Wj8UO4Dga5PvpPR_quB=x%2B-FhnbDw@mail.gmail.com> References: <CA%2BhK6ZkkxLddTsNx85zuRT44TJpJsc1p4uMq%2B%2BG44rU8W63F9g@mail.gmail.com> <CAF6rxgm4r4FEtNi8Gsmn1Wj8UO4Dga5PvpPR_quB=x%2B-FhnbDw@mail.gmail.com>
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Thank you for the tips. On Mon, Oct 1, 2012 at 12:34 PM, Eitan Adler <lists@eitanadler.com> wrote: > On 1 October 2012 11:00, Cpet Services <cpetservice@gmail.com> wrote: > > I am trying to update features.html. Please look at > > http://cpet.multics.org/freebsddocs/data/features.html > > General comments: > > This page should be aimed at people that may have heard of FreeBSD but > are not current users. As such avoid using FreeBSD terminology or > giving configuration information. This of this as a marketing > document, not a technical one. > > Specific comments: > ""Over ten years of work have been put into..." - its a bit older than > 10 years now ;) > "FreeBSD 1/i386 a.out binaries on FreeBSD/amd64" - pretty cool, but a > feature? > Hhook - the description is pretty technical, and presupposes knowledge > of pfil(9) - perhaps some more general text is needed? > Accounting API - no need to specify how to enable it - perhaps make > this a link to the handbook page. Actually it would be cool if *all* > the headers were links to handbook pages. > > I didn't look in detail past the 9.0 section. > > > And tell me what you think of it. > > Thanks for working on this: this is one of the most important pages on > the website! I hope that your work makes it in. > > Have you seen http://wiki.freebsd.org/WhatsNew/FreeBSD10 as well? > > -- > Eitan Adler > -- -------------------------------------------------------- Chris Petrik FreeBSD Contributor Reincarnated cpet on irc
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