Date: Thu, 6 Jan 2005 05:36:20 +0000 (UTC) From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200501060536.j065aK2t078500@repoman.freebsd.org>
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keramida 2005-01-06 05:36:20 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml
Log:
English syntax & writing-style nit: split a sentence that is too long in
shorter, easier to digest parts, fixing the syntax too.
Revision Changes Path
1.254 +4 -3 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
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