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Date:      Fri, 3 Jan 2003 20:13:47 +0000
From:      Ceri Davies <setantae@submonkey.net>
To:        Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org>
Cc:        doc@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: request for review
Message-ID:  <20030103201347.GB10906@submonkey.net>
In-Reply-To: <20030103195936.GA10906@submonkey.net>
References:  <20030103145346.A45246@blackhelicopters.org> <20030103195936.GA10906@submonkey.net>

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On Fri, Jan 03, 2003 at 07:59:36PM +0000, Ceri Davies wrote:
> On Fri, Jan 03, 2003 at 02:53:46PM -0500, Michael Lucas wrote:
> > Since I agree there may be a conflict of interest in putting my own
> > book up in publish.html, I thought I'd post the diff here.
> 
> I don't see a problem with conflict of interest at all.
> But your diff is fine, please go ahead and commit.  If you're very uneasy
> about this, then I'll happily commit it for you.

Actually, looking again, I have a couple of comments:

+	<td><a href="http://www.AbsoluteBSD.com/"><IMG SRC="gifs/abs_bsd_cov.gif" WIDTH="165" HEIGHT="207" alt="book cover"></a></td>

Perhaps the alt attribute should be something more like "Absolute BSD cover
image".  "book cover" isn't too descriptive.

+	<td>Absolute BSD.  This book discusses management of
+	FreeBSD-based servers in an enterprise, high-performance
+	environment.

Add another comma after "high-performance".

Ceri
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For the dwelling of my ancestors!

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