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Date:      Mon, 24 Sep 2001 00:43:23 +0200 (SAST)
From:      Piet Delport <siberiyan@mweb.co.za>
To:        FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject:   docs/30809: fdisk(8) cleanup
Message-ID:  <200109232243.f8NMhNu02826@siberiyan.dyndns.org>

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>Number:         30809
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       fdisk(8) cleanup
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Sep 24 22:30:00 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Piet Delport
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD athalon 4.4-STABLE FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE #9: Sun Sep 23 07:40:24 SAST 2001 root@athalon:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ATHALON i386


	
>Description:

	Fix various minor errors in fdisk(8).

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

--- sbin/i386/fdisk/fdisk.8.orig	Thu Aug 16 13:35:43 2001
+++ sbin/i386/fdisk/fdisk.8	Sun Sep 23 02:42:24 2001
@@ -131,10 +131,11 @@
 .Ql ad0 ,
 and
 .Ql da0
-are being searched in that order, until one is
-being found responding.
+are searched in that order, until one is found to respond.
 .Pp
-When called with no arguments, it prints the sector 0 partition table.
+When called with no arguments,
+.Nm
+prints the sector 0 partition table.
 An example follows:
 .Bd -literal
 	******* Working on device /dev/ad0 *******
@@ -180,18 +181,17 @@
 .It Em "flag 80"
 specifies that this is the active partition.
 .It Em cyl , sector No and Em head
-fields are used to specify the beginning address
-and end address for the partition.
+fields are used to specify the beginning and end addresses of the partition.
 .It Em Note :
 these numbers are calculated using BIOS's understanding of the disk geometry
 and saved in the bootblock.
 .El
 .Pp
-The flags
+The
 .Fl i
 or
 .Fl u
-are used to indicate that the partition data is to be updated, unless the
+flags are used to indicate that the partition data is to be updated, unless the
 .Fl f
 option is used.  If the
 .Fl f
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@
 selects defaults for its questions to guarantee the above behavior.
 .Pp
 It displays each partition
-and ask if you want to edit it.
+and asks whether you want to edit it.
 If you say yes,
 it will step through each field showing the old value
 and asking for a new one.
@@ -227,20 +227,18 @@
 .Em active
 partition.
 Finally,
-when the all the data for the first sector has been accumulated,
-you are asked if you really want to rewrite sector 0.
-Only if you answer yes,
-will the data be written to disk.
+when all the data for sector 0 has been accumulated,
+you are asked to confirm whether you really want to rewrite it.
 .Pp
 The difference between the
 .Fl u
-flag and
+and
 .Fl i
-flag is that
+flags is that
 the
 .Fl u
-flag just edits the fields as they appear on the disk.
-While the
+flag just edits (updates) the fields as they appear on the disk,
+while the
 .Fl i
 flag is used to "initialize" sector 0;
 it will setup the last BIOS partition to use the whole disk for
@@ -248,9 +246,9 @@
 and make it active.
 .Sh NOTES
 The automatic calculation of starting cylinder etc. uses
-a set of figures that represent what the BIOS thinks is the
-geometry of the drive.
-These figures are by default taken from the incore disklabel,
+a set of figures that represent what the BIOS thinks the
+geometry of the drive is.
+These figures are taken from the incore disklabel by default,
 but the program initially gives you an opportunity to change them.
 This allows the user to create a bootblock that can work with drives
 that use geometry translation under the BIOS.
@@ -276,7 +274,7 @@
 from a
 .Ar configfile .
 The syntax of this file is very simple.  Each line is either a comment or
-a specification, and whitespace (except for newlines) are ignored:
+a specification, and whitespace (except for newlines) is not significant:
 .Bl -tag -width Ds
 .It Xo
 .Ic #
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