Date: Tue, 5 Dec 2006 18:14:25 +0200 From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> To: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>, Dmitry Morozovsky <marck@rinet.ru>, Doug Barton <dougb@FreeBSD.org>, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml Message-ID: <20061205161425.GD3357@kobe.laptop> In-Reply-To: <20061205152056.GM73470@submonkey.net> References: <200612041443.kB4EhpBG035838@repoman.freebsd.org> <4574A587.3050903@FreeBSD.org> <20061205135214.K72517@woozle.rinet.ru> <20061205152056.GM73470@submonkey.net>
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On 2006-12-05 15:20, Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> wrote:
>On Tue, Dec 05, 2006 at 01:53:54PM +0300, Dmitry Morozovsky wrote:
>> --- books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml 4 Dec 2006 14:43:50 -0000 1.338
>> +++ books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml 5 Dec 2006 10:53:35 -0000
>> @@ -2356,7 +2356,7 @@
>>
>> <listitem>
>> <para>The address block being used for this local area
>> - network is a Class C block
>> + network is a (historical) Class C block
>> (<hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0</hostid> -
>> <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.255</hostid>).
>> The default netmask is for a Class C network
>
> Any reason we can't get rid of the mention of "class C" in both cases
> there? Something like:
>
> The address block being used for this local area network is
> 192.168.0.0 - 192.168.0.255 with a netmask of 255.255.255.0.
Or even better:
The address block being used for this local area network is
<emphasis>192.168.0.0/24</emphasis>.
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