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Date:      Thu, 7 Nov 2019 15:47:06 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Ed Maste <emaste@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r354445 - head/share/man/man4
Message-ID:  <201911071547.xA7Fl6qs074928@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: emaste
Date: Thu Nov  7 15:47:05 2019
New Revision: 354445
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/354445

Log:
  nvdimm.4: small grammar improvements

Modified:
  head/share/man/man4/nvdimm.4

Modified: head/share/man/man4/nvdimm.4
==============================================================================
--- head/share/man/man4/nvdimm.4	Thu Nov  7 15:32:59 2019	(r354444)
+++ head/share/man/man4/nvdimm.4	Thu Nov  7 15:47:05 2019	(r354445)
@@ -121,12 +121,12 @@ and then updated by
 .Sh BUGS
 The
 .Nm
-driver does not utilize the Block Window interface, so if the write to
-NVDIMM was interrupted due to a system crash or power outage,
-the corresponding page might be left in partially updated state.
+driver does not utilize the Block Window interface, so if a write to an
+NVDIMM is interrupted due to a system crash or power outage,
+the corresponding page might be left in a partially updated state.
 .Pp
 There is no support for Device-Specific Methods (DSM), used to report and
-control the device health and wearing.
+control device health and wearing.
 .Pp
 The driver depends on the
 .Xr pmap_largemap 9



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