Date: Fri, 3 Jan 2003 20:28:18 +0000 From: Ceri Davies <setantae@submonkey.net> To: John Baldwin <jhb@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc@freebsd.org, Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org> Subject: Re: request for review Message-ID: <20030103202818.GC10906@submonkey.net> In-Reply-To: <XFMail.20030103152335.jhb@FreeBSD.org> References: <20030103201347.GB10906@submonkey.net> <XFMail.20030103152335.jhb@FreeBSD.org>
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On Fri, Jan 03, 2003 at 03:23:35PM -0500, John Baldwin wrote: > > On 03-Jan-2003 Ceri Davies wrote: > > On Fri, Jan 03, 2003 at 07:59:36PM +0000, Ceri Davies wrote: > > + <td>Absolute BSD. This book discusses management of > > + FreeBSD-based servers in an enterprise, high-performance > > + environment. > > > > Add another comma after "high-performance". > > Why? Because it's Friday evening and I am, once again, dead on my feet. > One doesn't normally put commas between adjectives and the > nouns they describe. I might write "the green, fast car", but > I wouldn't write "the green, car" or "the green, fast, car". Of course. Ceri [That'll do, sigmonster; that'll do] -- A child of five could understand this! Fetch me a child of five. To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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