Date: Wed, 7 Jul 2004 23:59:28 -0400 (EDT) From: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Cc: hmp@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/68799: Fix a couple language nits in tuning.7 Message-ID: <20040708035928.5E9665C2A@guest.reppep.com> Resent-Message-ID: <200407080400.i6840kox056904@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 68799 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Fix a couple language nits in tuning.7 >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Thu Jul 08 04:00:46 GMT 2004 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Chris Pepper >Release: FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD guest.reppep.com 5.2.1-RELEASE FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE #1: Thu Jun 17 23:50:42 EDT 2004 root@guest.reppep.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/REPPEP5 i386 >Description: tuning.7 has some minor problems (effects used where affects should be, and similar). >How-To-Repeat: man tuning >Fix: Patch like so: --- tuning.7.patch begins here --- --- /usr/src/share/man/man7/tuning.7 Sun Sep 14 19:44:55 2003 +++ tuning.7 Wed Jul 7 23:53:53 2004 @@ -582,9 +582,9 @@ interactive connections, especially over slow modems, will also be able to operate with lower round trip times. However, note that this feature -only effects data transmission (uploading / server-side). +only affects data transmission (uploading / server-side). It does not -effect data reception (downloading). +affect data reception (downloading). .Pp Adjusting .Va net.inet.tcp.inflight_stab @@ -625,8 +625,8 @@ This most commonly occurs when you are running a heavily loaded web proxy. The port range is not an issue -when running serves which handle mainly incoming connections, such as a -normal web server, or has a limited number of outgoing connections, such +when running servers which handle mainly incoming connections, such as a +normal web server, or have a limited number of outgoing connections, such as a mail relay. For situations where you may run yourself out of ports, we recommend increasing --- tuning.7.patch ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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