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Date:      Mon, 29 Oct 2001 12:15:59 +0000
From:      setantae <setantae@submonkey.net>
To:        FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject:   docs/31583: Minor readability fixes for mount_ntfs.8
Message-ID:  <E15yBKh-0003WY-00@rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net>

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>Number:         31583
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Minor readability fixes for mount_ntfs.8
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Oct 29 04:20:01 PST 2001
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     setantae@submonkey.net
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net 4.4-STABLE FreeBSD 4.4-STABLE #0: Fri Oct 26 20:03:42 BST 2001 root@rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/RHADAMANTH i386


	
>Description:
	
	Minor changes to improve readability in mount_ntfs.8

>How-To-Repeat:
	man mount_ntfs
>Fix:
	
--- mount_ntfs.8.old	Sat Oct 27 10:43:14 2001
+++ mount_ntfs.8	Sat Oct 27 10:43:14 2001
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
 Specify unix to unicode translation table. This option is
 completly stolen from
 .Xr mount_msdos 8
-so refer its manpage.
+so refer to it's manpage.
 .El
 .Sh FEATURES
 NTFS file attributes are accessed in following way:
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
 .Ed
 .Pp
 .Sq ATTRTYPE
-is one of identifier listed in $AttrDef file of
+is one of the identifiers listed in $AttrDef file of
 volume.
 Default is $DATA.
 .Sq ATTRNAME
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
 # mount_ntfs /dev/ad1s1 /mnt
 .Ed
 .Pp
-To get volume name (in Unicode):
+To get the volume name (in Unicode):
 .Bd -literal -offset indent
 # cat /mnt/\\$Volume:\\$VOLUME_NAME
 .Ed
@@ -119,15 +119,15 @@
 .Sh WRITING
 There is limited writing ability.
 Limitations: file must be nonresident
-and must not contain any sparces (uninitialized areas), compressed
-files are not supported either.
+and must not contain any sparces (uninitialized areas); compressed
+files are also not supported.
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr mount 2 ,
 .Xr unmount 2 ,
 .Xr fstab 5 ,
 .Xr mount 8
 .Sh CAVEATS
-This utility gives almost only read-only access to NTFS volume.
+This utility gives almost only read-only access to an NTFS volume.
 See
 .Sx WRITING
 section.
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
 first appeared in
 .Fx 3.0 .
 .Sh AUTHORS
-NTFS kernel implementation,
+The NTFS kernel implementation,
 .Nm
-and manual were written by
+utility and manual were written by
 .An Semen Ustimenko Aq semenu@FreeBSD.org .
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