Date: Sun, 22 Sep 2002 20:21:15 +0200 (CEST) From: Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/43260: [PATCH] various fixes for ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200209221821.g8MILFxp064454@Kain.sumuk.de>
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>Number: 43260
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [PATCH] various fixes for ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sun Sep 22 11:30:01 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Martin Heinen
>Release: FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD Kain.sumuk.de 4.6-STABLE FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE #0: Mon Aug 12 13:45:36 CEST 2002 toor@Kain.sumuk.de:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/KAIN i386
>Description:
- added full stops at the end of sentences,
- change some markup,
- CISCO -> Cisco,
- replace & with 'and'.
>How-To-Repeat:
Read the chapter "PPP and SLIP".
>Fix:
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.89
diff -u -r1.89 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml 29 Aug 2002 10:35:52 -0000 1.89
+++ chapter.sgml 22 Sep 2002 15:44:27 -0000
@@ -324,30 +324,30 @@
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ppp</userinput></screen>
- <para>We have now started <command>ppp</command></para>
+ <para>We have now started <command>ppp</command>.</para>
<screen>ppp ON example> <userinput>set device <devicename>/dev/cuaa1</devicename></userinput></screen>
<para>We set our modem device, in this case it is
- <devicename>cuaa1</devicename></para>
+ <devicename>cuaa1</devicename>.</para>
<screen>ppp ON example> <userinput>set speed 115200</userinput></screen>
<para>Set the connection speed, in this case we
- are using 115,200 <acronym>kbps</acronym></para>
+ are using 115,200 <acronym>kbps</acronym>.</para>
<screen>ppp ON example> <userinput>enable dns</userinput></screen>
<para>Tell <command>ppp</command> to configure our
resolver and add the nameserver lines to
<filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename>. If we <command>ppp</command>
- cannot determine our hostname, we can set one manually later
+ cannot determine our hostname, we can set one manually later.
</para>
<screen>ppp ON example> <userinput>term</userinput></screen>
- <para>Switch to "terminal" mode so that we can manually
- control the modem</para>
+ <para>Switch to <quote>terminal</quote> mode so that we can manually
+ control the modem.</para>
<programlisting>
deflink: Entering terminal mode on <devicename>/dev/cuaa1</devicename>
@@ -359,7 +359,7 @@
<para>Use <command>at</command> to initialize the modem,
then use <command>atdt</command> and the number for your
- <acronym>ISP</acronym> to begin the dial in process</para>
+ <acronym>ISP</acronym> to begin the dial in process.</para>
<screen>CONNECT</screen>
@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@
<para>Here you are prompted for a username, return the
prompt with the username that was provided by the
- <acronym>ISP</acronym></para>
+ <acronym>ISP</acronym>.</para>
<screen>ISP Pass:<userinput>mypassword</userinput></screen>
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@
<screen>PPP ON example></screen>
<para>We have made an agreement on an <acronym>IP</acronym>
- address and successfully completed our connection</para>
+ address and successfully completed our connection.</para>
<screen>PPP ON example><userinput>add default HISADDR</userinput></screen>
@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@
before we can talk to the outside world as currently the
only established connection is with the peer. If this
fails due to existing routes you can put a bang character
- <emphasis>!</emphasis> in front of the <option>add</option>.
+ <literal>!</literal> in front of the <option>add</option>.
Alternatively, you can set this before making the actual connection
and it will negotiate a new route accordingly.</para>
@@ -701,7 +701,7 @@
<para>You must enclose the phone number in quotation marks
(<literal>"</literal>) if there is any intention on using
spaces in the phone number. This can cause a simple, yet
- subtle error</para>
+ subtle error.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -1559,7 +1559,7 @@
<indexterm><primary>PPP</primary><secondary>client</secondary></indexterm>
<indexterm><primary>Cisco</primary></indexterm>
<para>The following <filename>/etc/ppp/options</filename> might be
- used to connect to a CISCO terminal server PPP line.</para>
+ used to connect to a Cisco terminal server PPP line.</para>
<programlisting>crtscts # enable hardware flow control
modem # modem control line
@@ -2403,7 +2410,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Set the startup flags of sl0 by adding a
+ <para>Set the startup flags of <devicename>sl0</devicename> by adding a
line:</para>
<programlisting>ifconfig_sl0="inet ${hostname} slip-gateway netmask 0xffffff00 up"</programlisting>
@@ -2560,8 +2567,8 @@
<listitem>
<para>Also, <command>netstat -r</command> will give the
- routing table, in case you get the <quote>no route to
- host</quote> messages from ping. An example shown here:</para>
+ routing table, in case you get the <errorname>no route to
+ host</errorname> messages from ping. An example shown here:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>netstat -r</userinput>
Routing tables
@@ -2765,7 +2772,7 @@
the configuration for <filename>/usr/sbin/sliplogin</filename>
(see &man.sliplogin.8; for the actual manual page for
<command>sliplogin</command>): <filename>slip.hosts</filename>,
- which defines the SLIP users & their associated IP
+ which defines the SLIP users and their associated IP
addresses; <filename>slip.login</filename>, which usually just
configures the SLIP interface; and (optionally)
<filename>slip.logout</filename>, which undoes
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