Date: Sun, 22 Sep 2002 20:21:15 +0200 (CEST) From: Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/43260: [PATCH] various fixes for ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200209221821.g8MILFxp064454@Kain.sumuk.de>
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>Number: 43260 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [PATCH] various fixes for ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Sep 22 11:30:01 PDT 2002 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Martin Heinen >Release: FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD Kain.sumuk.de 4.6-STABLE FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE #0: Mon Aug 12 13:45:36 CEST 2002 toor@Kain.sumuk.de:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/KAIN i386 >Description: - added full stops at the end of sentences, - change some markup, - CISCO -> Cisco, - replace & with 'and'. >How-To-Repeat: Read the chapter "PPP and SLIP". >Fix: Index: chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.89 diff -u -r1.89 chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml 29 Aug 2002 10:35:52 -0000 1.89 +++ chapter.sgml 22 Sep 2002 15:44:27 -0000 @@ -324,30 +324,30 @@ <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ppp</userinput></screen> - <para>We have now started <command>ppp</command></para> + <para>We have now started <command>ppp</command>.</para> <screen>ppp ON example> <userinput>set device <devicename>/dev/cuaa1</devicename></userinput></screen> <para>We set our modem device, in this case it is - <devicename>cuaa1</devicename></para> + <devicename>cuaa1</devicename>.</para> <screen>ppp ON example> <userinput>set speed 115200</userinput></screen> <para>Set the connection speed, in this case we - are using 115,200 <acronym>kbps</acronym></para> + are using 115,200 <acronym>kbps</acronym>.</para> <screen>ppp ON example> <userinput>enable dns</userinput></screen> <para>Tell <command>ppp</command> to configure our resolver and add the nameserver lines to <filename>/etc/resolv.conf</filename>. If we <command>ppp</command> - cannot determine our hostname, we can set one manually later + cannot determine our hostname, we can set one manually later. </para> <screen>ppp ON example> <userinput>term</userinput></screen> - <para>Switch to "terminal" mode so that we can manually - control the modem</para> + <para>Switch to <quote>terminal</quote> mode so that we can manually + control the modem.</para> <programlisting> deflink: Entering terminal mode on <devicename>/dev/cuaa1</devicename> @@ -359,7 +359,7 @@ <para>Use <command>at</command> to initialize the modem, then use <command>atdt</command> and the number for your - <acronym>ISP</acronym> to begin the dial in process</para> + <acronym>ISP</acronym> to begin the dial in process.</para> <screen>CONNECT</screen> @@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ <para>Here you are prompted for a username, return the prompt with the username that was provided by the - <acronym>ISP</acronym></para> + <acronym>ISP</acronym>.</para> <screen>ISP Pass:<userinput>mypassword</userinput></screen> @@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ <screen>PPP ON example></screen> <para>We have made an agreement on an <acronym>IP</acronym> - address and successfully completed our connection</para> + address and successfully completed our connection.</para> <screen>PPP ON example><userinput>add default HISADDR</userinput></screen> @@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ before we can talk to the outside world as currently the only established connection is with the peer. If this fails due to existing routes you can put a bang character - <emphasis>!</emphasis> in front of the <option>add</option>. + <literal>!</literal> in front of the <option>add</option>. Alternatively, you can set this before making the actual connection and it will negotiate a new route accordingly.</para> @@ -701,7 +701,7 @@ <para>You must enclose the phone number in quotation marks (<literal>"</literal>) if there is any intention on using spaces in the phone number. This can cause a simple, yet - subtle error</para> + subtle error.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -1559,7 +1559,7 @@ <indexterm><primary>PPP</primary><secondary>client</secondary></indexterm> <indexterm><primary>Cisco</primary></indexterm> <para>The following <filename>/etc/ppp/options</filename> might be - used to connect to a CISCO terminal server PPP line.</para> + used to connect to a Cisco terminal server PPP line.</para> <programlisting>crtscts # enable hardware flow control modem # modem control line @@ -2403,7 +2410,7 @@ </listitem> <listitem> - <para>Set the startup flags of sl0 by adding a + <para>Set the startup flags of <devicename>sl0</devicename> by adding a line:</para> <programlisting>ifconfig_sl0="inet ${hostname} slip-gateway netmask 0xffffff00 up"</programlisting> @@ -2560,8 +2567,8 @@ <listitem> <para>Also, <command>netstat -r</command> will give the - routing table, in case you get the <quote>no route to - host</quote> messages from ping. An example shown here:</para> + routing table, in case you get the <errorname>no route to + host</errorname> messages from ping. An example shown here:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>netstat -r</userinput> Routing tables @@ -2765,7 +2772,7 @@ the configuration for <filename>/usr/sbin/sliplogin</filename> (see &man.sliplogin.8; for the actual manual page for <command>sliplogin</command>): <filename>slip.hosts</filename>, - which defines the SLIP users & their associated IP + which defines the SLIP users and their associated IP addresses; <filename>slip.login</filename>, which usually just configures the SLIP interface; and (optionally) <filename>slip.logout</filename>, which undoes >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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