Date: Sat, 3 Aug 2013 14:10:45 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42491 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide Message-ID: <201308031410.r73EAjDK044919@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Sat Aug 3 14:10:45 2013 New Revision: 42491 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42491 Log: Clarity and punctuation improvements. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sat Aug 3 13:33:20 2013 (r42490) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sat Aug 3 14:10:45 2013 (r42491) @@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ </itemizedlist> <para>Subversion can be installed from the &os; Ports - Collection, by issuing the following commands:</para> + Collection by issuing these commands:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/ports/devel/subversion</userinput> &prompt.root; <userinput>make clean install</userinput></screen> @@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ <title>&os; Ports Tree Branches and Layout</title> <para>In <literal>svn+ssh://svn.freebsd.org/ports</literal>, - <emphasis>ports</emphasis> refers repository root of the + <emphasis>ports</emphasis> refers to the repository root of the ports tree.</para> <para>In general, most &os; port work will be done within @@ -710,8 +710,8 @@ <para>It is possible to anonymously check out the &os; repository with Subversion. This will give access to a - read-only tree that can be updated, but not committed - to. To do this, use the following command:</para> + read-only tree that can be updated, but not committed back + to the main repository. To do this, use the following command:</para> <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn co <replaceable>https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/base/head /usr/src</userinput></screen> @@ -801,8 +801,8 @@ <note> <para>Most new source files should include a - <literal>$&os;$</literal> string in the - new file. On commit, <command>svn</command> will expand + <literal>$&os;$</literal> string near the start of the + file. On commit, <command>svn</command> will expand the <literal>$&os;$</literal> string, adding the file path, revision number, date and time of commit, and the username of the committer. Files which
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