Date: Tue, 20 Jan 2004 15:56:34 -0800 (PST) From: Mark Linimon <linimon@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml Message-ID: <200401202356.i0KNuY5h043255@repoman.freebsd.org>
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linimon 2004/01/20 15:56:34 PST
FreeBSD doc repository (ports committer)
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml
Log:
[ports committer:] in a few cases, the Handbook introduces a concept,
elaborates on the concept, and then justifies the reason for the concept.
This make the document read a little bit strangely. This fix switches
the latter two. Very little new text is introduced, just some rewording.
PR: docs/61653 (partial)
Reviewed by: ceri
Approved by: ceri
Revision Changes Path
1.360 +32 -33 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml
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