Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 21:54:13 +0200 From: Pav Lucistnik <pav@FreeBSD.org> To: Martin Cracauer <cracauer@cons.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Update for www/amd64/motherboards.sgml - please review Message-ID: <1124135653.37769.16.camel@ikaros.oook.cz> In-Reply-To: <20050815154552.A95576@cons.org>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] Martin Cracauer píše v po 15. 08. 2005 v 15:45 -0400: > Can somebody who has the SGML system running and is a native speaker > of English please review the appended diff? > > It contains entries for the 4 mainboards that I tried with > FreeBSD/AMD64 recently. I'm the lord of motherboard page... Could you please make the Notes fields a little less verbose, and drop all strictly non-technical stuff? Check http://www.freebsd.org/platforms/amd64/motherboards.html for inspiration. No prices, no reviews, no feelings, just terse notes about what works with FreeBSD and what not. Also please wrap the lines at 72. Or I can fix the style once we're happy with the content. More notes: - Dual-core Opteron == Opteron rev. E. - please use formal talk, Windoze -> Windows ... Can you please send me an updated patch? -- Pav Lucistnik <pav@oook.cz> <pav@FreeBSD.org> [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.2 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQBDAPLlntdYP8FOsoIRAl8DAJ9V3pCCYverrSSVsUAqE/gyywlo1gCfU0tC 6LkDrwxAo5weFb63x1ryhEI= =hbZB -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----help
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