Date: Wed, 15 Feb 2012 20:24:52 -0700 (MST) From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> To: Glen Barber <gjb@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: CfR: config chapter changes Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1202152008360.38645@wonkity.com> In-Reply-To: <20120216015300.GA1837@glenbarber.us> References: <CAF6rxgnvyoibFt7ijm6GpWoeF-eAOLu3SgvhEGCBDUAV4grybw@mail.gmail.com> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1202120028440.882@multics.mit.edu> <CAF6rxgmPyVXSFRJiOZZaJQFObhCsZMHS5_5UneVrb3t=wznMhA@mail.gmail.com> <20120215040311.GB1862@glenbarber.us> <20120215213448.GA29817@hemlock.hydra> <20120215221813.GB5203@glenbarber.us> <CAF6rxgkY21MMfUWRMRnvWsTGC_2QspnfWqCKrFc_QDedTQMOoQ@mail.gmail.com> <20120216015300.GA1837@glenbarber.us>
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On Wed, 15 Feb 2012, Glen Barber wrote: >> <para>User crontabs allow individual users to schedule tasks without the >> @@ -487,10 +487,11 @@ >> permissions of the user who owns the crontab.</para> >> >> <para>The <username>root</username> user can have a user >> crontab just like >> - any other user. This one is different from >> - <filename>/etc/crontab</filename> (the system crontab). Because of the >> - system crontab, there is usually no need to create a user crontab >> - for <username>root</username>.</para> >> + any other user. The <username>root</username> user crontab is >> + distinct from <filename>/etc/crontab</filename> (the system crontab). > > I don't understand this sentence. "Distinct" why/how? Maybe it would > be better to just say "separate" here. Distinct was my word, trying to point out that /etc/crontab is *not* root's crontab. ... >> @@ -1944,7 +1942,7 @@ >> out of space and the update to fail.</para> >> >> <sect3> >> - <title>More Details about Soft Updates</title> >> + <title>More Details About Soft Updates</title> >> > > I'm not sure this "about" should be capitalized. I may be wrong, but I > do not believe prepositions should be capitalized in titles like this > unless they are the first word of the title. Or, in AP style, if they are longer than four letters.
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