Date: Tue, 13 Sep 2005 18:23:09 +0000 (UTC) From: "Gary W. Swearingen" <garys@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200509131823.j8DIN91q073692@repoman.freebsd.org>
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garys 2005-09-13 18:23:09 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom chapter.sgml
Log:
Inserted a missing parenthesis, hyphen, comma, an "a", a "the", and
-- Removed "for" from "caused for the system".
-- Changed "filesystem" to "file system".
-- Changed "base base" to "base".
-- Replaced a comma with a semicolon.
-- Changed "We skip using" to "We avoid using".
-- Changed ", i.e.:" to "; i.e.,".
-- Down-cased "In" at the start of a sentence fragment.
Approved by: keramida
Revision Changes Path
1.10 +12 -12 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml
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