Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 15:58:10 -0400 From: Martin Cracauer <cracauer@cons.org> To: Pav Lucistnik <pav@FreeBSD.org> Cc: Martin Cracauer <cracauer@cons.org>, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Update for www/amd64/motherboards.sgml - please review Message-ID: <20050815155810.A95917@cons.org> In-Reply-To: <1124135653.37769.16.camel@ikaros.oook.cz>; from pav@FreeBSD.org on Mon, Aug 15, 2005 at 09:54:13PM %2B0200 References: <20050815154552.A95576@cons.org> <1124135653.37769.16.camel@ikaros.oook.cz>
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Pav Lucistnik wrote on Mon, Aug 15, 2005 at 09:54:13PM +0200: > Martin Cracauer píse v po 15. 08. 2005 v 15:45 -0400: > > Can somebody who has the SGML system running and is a native speaker > > of English please review the appended diff? > > > > It contains entries for the 4 mainboards that I tried with > > FreeBSD/AMD64 recently. > > I'm the lord of motherboard page... > > Could you please make the Notes fields a little less verbose, and drop > all strictly non-technical stuff? Check > http://www.freebsd.org/platforms/amd64/motherboards.html > for inspiration. No prices, no reviews, no feelings, just terse notes > about what works with FreeBSD and what not. I don't think that would be too useful. Things are a little more complicated than just "works" or not. I'll drop some of the pure impression stuff, lets see how we are doing then. > Also please wrap the lines at 72. Or I can fix the style once we're > happy with the content. OK, I was just following the style of the other entries. > More notes: > - Dual-core Opteron == Opteron rev. E. No, different things. All dual-cores are E steppings, but there are single-core E stepping processors, too. > - please use formal talk, Windoze -> Windows ... Ohhhhhhh :-) Martin -- %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% Martin Cracauer <cracauer@cons.org> http://www.cons.org/cracauer/ No warranty. This email is probably produced by one of my cats stepping on the keys. No, I don't have an infinite number of cats.
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