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Date:      Thu, 28 Dec 2023 17:04:24 GMT
From:      Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   git: 6fa8497f35 - main - Remove more instances of "more complete" and replace with "complete"
Message-ID:  <202312281704.3BSH4Olv055423@gitrepo.freebsd.org>

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The branch main has been updated by bcr:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=6fa8497f35cded2a2f0911ed6f7e21b302c02a2e

commit 6fa8497f35cded2a2f0911ed6f7e21b302c02a2e
Author:     Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2023-12-28 17:03:39 +0000
Commit:     Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2023-12-28 17:03:39 +0000

    Remove more instances of "more complete" and replace with "complete"
---
 documentation/content/en/books/handbook/basics/_index.adoc          | 2 +-
 documentation/content/en/books/handbook/mail/_index.adoc            | 2 +-
 documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc | 2 +-
 documentation/content/en/books/handbook/security/_index.adoc        | 2 +-
 4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/basics/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/basics/_index.adoc
index 3d9da088b7..4eee8f3079 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/basics/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/basics/_index.adoc
@@ -624,7 +624,7 @@ Most of the time, the GID of a user or process usually means the first group in
 The group name to GID mapping is listed in `/etc/group`.
 This is a plain text file with four colon-delimited fields.
 The first field is the group name, the second is the encrypted password, the third the GID, and the fourth the comma-delimited list of members.
-For a more complete description of the syntax, refer to man:group[5].
+For a complete description of the syntax, refer to man:group[5].
 
 The superuser can modify `/etc/group` using a text editor, although editing the group file using man:vigr[8] is preferred because it can catch some common mistakes.
 Alternatively, man:pw[8] can be used to add and edit groups.
diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/mail/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/mail/_index.adoc
index f89e990075..711ab931da 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/mail/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/mail/_index.adoc
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ endif::[]
 
 "Electronic Mail", better known as email, is one of the most widely used forms of communication today.
 This chapter provides a basic introduction to running a mail server on FreeBSD, as well as an introduction to sending and receiving email using FreeBSD.
-For more complete coverage of this subject, refer to the books listed in crossref:bibliography[bibliography,Bibliography].
+For a complete coverage of this subject, refer to the books listed in crossref:bibliography[bibliography,Bibliography].
 
 This chapter covers:
 
diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc
index c0ac490c5b..daf764ed0c 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc
@@ -2760,7 +2760,7 @@ This section describes how to configure a FreeBSD system as a target or an initi
 To configure an iSCSI target, create the [.filename]#/etc/ctl.conf# configuration file, add a line to [.filename]#/etc/rc.conf# to make sure the man:ctld[8] daemon is automatically started at boot, and then start the daemon.
 
 The following is an example of a simple [.filename]#/etc/ctl.conf# configuration file.
-Refer to man:ctl.conf[5] for a more complete description of this file's available options.
+Refer to man:ctl.conf[5] for a complete description of this file's available options.
 
 [.programlisting]
 ....
diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/security/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/security/_index.adoc
index 252f417fc7..bfd486a4cc 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/security/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/security/_index.adoc
@@ -854,7 +854,7 @@ Then execute the following command to enable the service:
 The first time sshd starts on a FreeBSD system, the system's host keys will be automatically created and the fingerprint will be displayed on the console.
 Provide users with the fingerprint so that they can verify it the first time they connect to the server.
 
-Refer to man:sshd[8] for the list of available options when starting sshd and a more complete discussion about authentication, the login process, and the various configuration files.
+Refer to man:sshd[8] for the list of available options when starting sshd and a complete discussion about authentication, the login process, and the various configuration files.
 
 At this point, the sshd should be available to all users with a username and password on the system.
 



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